Hi, Isabella! I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. First off, your hook was attention-grabbing. I also liked how you incorporated your personal experiences as it made your pitch relatable. I don’t work in the food industry, but I can only imagine how inconvenient and frustrating it must feel when your clothes and sneakers get wet as a result of washing dishes. I also liked how you were detailed yet concise in explaining your product’s features. I am looking forward to seeing how your product comes together! Overall, great job!
I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. The hook at the beginning of the video caught my attention immediately. You did a great job at connecting yourself with the problem/opportunity that your pitching. It was clear to me that you were speaking from personal experience, which bolsters your credibility to potential investors. I also thought you did a good job at being short and precise about the opportunity, as well as highlighting the large market size. The only critique I have is your voice level, thought it could be a little louder. Overall you did an excellent job!
Isabella, Congrats on having a viewable video, haha! Excellent elevator pitch. I felt like I understood the need for this product, even though I have never faced this issue. In explaining the problems you and your coworkers faced, I was able to sympathize and understand the need that is present. I liked your professionalism and think you nailed it with the delivery!
Hi, Isabella! I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. First off, your hook was attention-grabbing. I also liked how you incorporated your personal experiences as it made your pitch relatable. I don’t work in the food industry, but I can only imagine how inconvenient and frustrating it must feel when your clothes and sneakers get wet as a result of washing dishes. I also liked how you were detailed yet concise in explaining your product’s features. I am looking forward to seeing how your product comes together! Overall, great job!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. The hook at the beginning of the video caught my attention immediately. You did a great job at connecting yourself with the problem/opportunity that your pitching. It was clear to me that you were speaking from personal experience, which bolsters your credibility to potential investors. I also thought you did a good job at being short and precise about the opportunity, as well as highlighting the large market size. The only critique I have is your voice level, thought it could be a little louder. Overall you did an excellent job!
Isabella,
ReplyDeleteCongrats on having a viewable video, haha! Excellent elevator pitch. I felt like I understood the need for this product, even though I have never faced this issue. In explaining the problems you and your coworkers faced, I was able to sympathize and understand the need that is present. I liked your professionalism and think you nailed it with the delivery!