17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
1. Link to Elevator Pitch: https://youtu.be/XmDgl5WX-8Q
2. All of the feedback that I received from my first Elevator Pitch was extremely positive. It was a bit difficult to get a take that I was satisfied with. The one suggestion I got was on my voice level in the video. I live with three other people so it can be a bit difficult to find a time to do assignments like this without causing a disruption. This time around, I tried to be a bit more mindful of that but my circumstances are the same. I kept my straightforward approach from the first time so hopefully, it was executed well.
3. Based on my own feedback, I tried to step back a bit further from my camera and project my voice a bit more. I'm hoping the acoustic and sounds quality is better than my first pitch. Considering the circumstances, I believe I did what I can for this assignment.
2. All of the feedback that I received from my first Elevator Pitch was extremely positive. It was a bit difficult to get a take that I was satisfied with. The one suggestion I got was on my voice level in the video. I live with three other people so it can be a bit difficult to find a time to do assignments like this without causing a disruption. This time around, I tried to be a bit more mindful of that but my circumstances are the same. I kept my straightforward approach from the first time so hopefully, it was executed well.
3. Based on my own feedback, I tried to step back a bit further from my camera and project my voice a bit more. I'm hoping the acoustic and sounds quality is better than my first pitch. Considering the circumstances, I believe I did what I can for this assignment.
Hi Isabella! I enjoyed watching your second elevator pitch. Your hook was very engaging and grabbed my attention right away. I liked how you were direct and concise in explaining the key features of your product. I also thought your voice level was clear and the sound quality was good. Like you, I also generally received positive feedback on my elevator pitch. But on my video, I received a suggestion on how I can elaborate in explaining the features of my product. I thought you did great incorporating the feedback you received into your video. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteHello Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your second elevator pitch on the dishwasher product. It was clear to me that you improved greatly from your first elevator pitch. It was great how you started the pitch with an effective hook that described the problem you intend to solve. Your tone throughout the pitch was energetic and the sound quality was excellent. I completely understand the struggle of finding a time to record a good elevator speech as I also have 3 other roommates. Overall, great elevator speech!!
Hey Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI loved watching your second pitch, and I also think your product has come a very long way since the start. I really think the video explains the product well, as far as the problem at hand and how you are going to sell it. I think you did a great job of incorporating the feedback from others, as well as providing the same information that was vital to explaining your idea. Overall, great job!
Hey Isabella,
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! you wasted no time getting straight into it directly describing and talking about your product. I can really see that you truly implemented that feedback that was given to you and used it for greater purpose. Great job on this second pitch!