22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
Link to Elevator Pitch: https://youtu.be/ZvsFK0hmUTE
The feedback I've been receiving for my elevator pitches has overall been very positive. Everyone seems to appreciate the direct approach that I seem to be taking. I reviewed my past pitches and made sure to include the essential information about my product. Just like my past attempts, I tried to make everything as clear and concise as I could.
Initially, I didn't think much had changed from my first and last pitch. However, when I was filming the pitches, I could tell I got more and more comfortable in front on the camera by the third pitch. This time around I felt like I had the important information about my product memorized. Overall, I could definitely see the importance of doing this assignment several times.
The feedback I've been receiving for my elevator pitches has overall been very positive. Everyone seems to appreciate the direct approach that I seem to be taking. I reviewed my past pitches and made sure to include the essential information about my product. Just like my past attempts, I tried to make everything as clear and concise as I could.
Initially, I didn't think much had changed from my first and last pitch. However, when I was filming the pitches, I could tell I got more and more comfortable in front on the camera by the third pitch. This time around I felt like I had the important information about my product memorized. Overall, I could definitely see the importance of doing this assignment several times.
Hi, Isabella! I enjoyed watching your last elevator pitch. You were clear and concise in explaining the main features of your product. I had a similar experience as yours because like you, I received positive feedback on my previous elevator pitches. I also felt more confident in front of the camera by the third pitch. Now, I recognize why it was important to do the elevator pitches three times and feel grateful I had the opportunity to enhance this skillset. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteIsabella,
ReplyDeleteYour explanation for your product was very easy to understand. I think what is very interesting is that someone who does not work in the restaurant industry could see the value in having a way to stay dry when washing dishes by hand. In other words, the product is relatable to a wide audience. Again, I worked at a restaurant as a dishwasher in high school and something like this would have been greatly appreciated.
Hey Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your third and final elevator pitch. You did an excellent job at highlighting your product and the problem it intends to solve. I thought this elevator pitch was your best one ever, since you kept your tone, movement, and posture consistent throughout the entire pitch. You seemed to be very comfortable when presenting which gave your pitch a credibility aspect many cannot achieve. Overall, great elevator pitch.
Hey Isabella,
ReplyDeleteAwesome job on pitch No. 3! I really enjoy learning more about your product because I think its a product with many advantages for those who work in the restaurant/food service industry. My first year of college I worked at a local restaurant and this is something that would have been perfect. As far as your overall pitch, you seemed very collected and ready to present your product and that was a big plus! you seem credible and know every nook and cranny of your product.